Hello,
I am running small independent Mac app development house in Serbia. As you can imagine, my English often does not sound entirely correct and sentences lack a lot of ‘a’ ‘and’ and ‘the’ to look right.
I am about to publish Mac App Store (Apple computers related) application and it requires some polishing. There is not much text, everything is below 1000 words. There are four screenshots (they are very important because they are highly visible in the App Store) and description text for the app.
I am send you txt file, please feel free to take a look. I have tried to explain everything right inside so I hope you’ll see all the explanations easily.
I am looking for three things:
#1: Proofread and Edit four screenshots titles and subtitles. They have to be grammatically correct but they can use stronger or not entirely correct ‘advertising’ language. If something needs rephrasing badly feel free to suggest changes. Otherwise just make it correct.
#2: Proofread and Edit main text.
#3: Rephrase main text as you see fit.
If you need any additional info, I can send you Mac App Store links for apps that do well there, so you can see how everything looks at the actual marketplace.
Kind Regards,
Dusan Popovic
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